Since earlier days than King Varodel could remember the plague had been moving closer to his fathers Kingdom of Dardinpale. Varodel's father had recently passed away of unknown causes. Varodel was young to the age of 16 when he had to take on being an heir to the throne. When Varodel was only 4 his mother was kidnapped in a small village that his family lived in before his father lead others to the new land and had them build this glorious kingdom. Nobody ever knew what happened to Varodel's mother nor did they wish to know.
Many believed Varodel's mother, Saleoma to be a witch. Late at night when others feared to journy out any farther than their front door in fear of bandits, werewolves, and creatures of that such she would go into the nearby woods and not come back until the moon was gone. If the moon was full Saleoma would take David, Varodel's father in with her and there could be dim blues and reds seen flashing from the view of the villagers windows.
Varodel didn't exactly have the best child hood but he was a clever young man even though many called him more trouble than good because of his pure love for pulling pranks on the other villagers. But how long will the kingdom hold with a 16 year old boy as the king? And would whatever was moving towards his new inheritance pose a threat to his people and maybe even his own life?

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Warning! Read before Posting!
Okay here is the deal, this is not the story itself I'm just kind of giving you a preview of what my story is going to be about. Please do not post wow cool posts or any smileys in this thread seeing that it is going to be long already I want the least extra lag in here I can get. Since I have said this there is not excuse for posting these kinds of things thank you very much, King.
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So you ask what you can post? Okay I want you guys to help me with this story I am going to allow you guys to submit a character request before I start the story. Basically what this will be is something you fill out and it will get your character in the story which will probably be pretty long.
-------------------------Here is the Character Request Application-------------------------------
Character Name:
Character Info: ( what is this person like are they creepy, do they sneak around alot, are they a thief, are they a witch, are they important? if you submit one I basically want a summary on your characters life )
Poor or Rich:
Family members: ( go into small detail of any family members they have )
Hero or Villain: ( will they be in Varodel's kingdom or in one that will be against him )

Oh by the way I know this is a double post but I just want people to see this part if you want a character of your choice in the story I'm going to start chapter 1 - 5 tonight. So if your character isn't submitted before then it will not be in the story sorry. And by the way did I mention I will be making every 5 chapters into an episode on Youtube. It will basically be the same story with illustrations.

Just curious. But is this an RPG or a collaborative story?

It is kind of a collaborative story other than I'm not really helped with it I just want some peoples ideas for characters so if they decide to read the story they can see a little of what they put into the story in it.

me in it plz

Fill out this form Cedog12 and I will put your character in the store no numbers though please and thank you.

Character Name:
Character Info: ( what is
this person like are they creepy, do they sneak around alot, are they a
thief, are they a witch, are they important? if you submit one I
basically want a summary on your characters life )
Poor or Rich:
Family members: ( go into small detail of any family members they have )
Hero or Villain: ( will they be in Varodel's kingdom or in one that will be against him )

hmm, how to put myself on an aplication form.....

Character Name: Chanter
Character Info: A bard, intelligent; wants to be a scholar but can't make enough money; not nerdy but can't get a lady; side character that could be important to the story if you pay attention to the lyrics of his songs (if that made any sense LOL); about 17; traveler at heart but settled in Dardinpale until he makes enough money.
As i have said poor
Family members: Left behind in the Kingdom of Ennuyeux
Obviously since he is settled in Dardinpale he could potentialy be a hero

I hope this can be fit in... even changed a little if you want :D
Good luck with your story and I can't wait to help more on it!!

Ok wow that is a great character and got my creativity flowing While I start making a list of characters for Dardinpale I will still be accepting any character entries for here. If you don't submit your character before I'm done you will have to wait until the story makes it to another town.

yw king. Did you get everything or need me to explain my thoughts...

I needed you to explain your thoughts and I will form that character as much around what I think you would like him to be as possible also would you like to make a more villainous character I need one to help get a little mystery in the town? If you do thank you very much.

first off, i would kinda like him to sing songs everyonce in a while that DIRECTLY relate to something important going on in the town, obviously when you leave towns you would leave him behind bc he is settled there. HOWEVER! He is a bard and you may bring him back as you see fit. (lol kinda commanding aren't i...) anwho, As for a villan:
Character Title: Mauvais
Info: Lives in the Kingdom of Fou as a degoutant to the evil overlord. A degoutant (for the story) would be a kind of right hand man that tells the troops to attack someone, spies on enemies, or do whatever the overlord pleases. That kinda thing. He wears a long black coat called an aile with black leggings and black boots. Over his head her wears a voile, or bandana like cloth that clovers all but his eyes. He usually is out and about on the countryside, ruling for the overlord, on his black stallion named Mort. The horse has a long scar running across his left side from a blow from the knight in shining armor (some kind of past hero). the horse has outlive 5 generations and is the best fighting horse in all of eternity. Much like his horse, Mauvais bears a long scar running from his left eyebrow to his juggular. This was also given by the same past hero which is rumored to also live forever and that the horse was once his, but turned evil when came into the possesion of Mauvais. Unlike the horse, his skin is pale white, despite the fact he is continuously outside. Also, from pure hatred of the hero, and the evil bruing inside of him, his hair has turned thick and black and his eyes, solid red (with pupils of course). it may be to the disgression of the writer to have the horse talk, but I reccomend that he gives up his voice once taken by Mauvais.
Of course, working for an evil overlod, he HAS to be rich, FILTHY RICH!!
To be a degoutant, you must first banish your family from Fou, to make sure you can be evil enough. This could be a back story of memories of his family. Maybe they appear later?
MOST DEFINITLY, if the MAIN villian, the right hand villian...
Was that pretty clear? LOL
ask if you would like me to elaborate on any character

oh btw, if it's not clear to anyone, I get my names from french words, chanter mean to sing, Ennuyeux means boring, mauvais means bad, aile means wing, etc.

I have Completed Chapter 1 lol it is kind of long so it took a while I hope you guys enjoy. :)


The night stirred silently and the crisp leaf fell gently through the dry fall breeze, landing next to its neighbor leaves in a big pile on the ground. The sound of a mouse warning it's friends that there was an owl headed towards them to steal the small apple they had worked for hours to pull off of the tree high above and had barely had a chance to feast on is all that could be heard.

What would happen momentarilly on this quiet night would go down as the most significant battle of history.

In the distance a small light began floating closer towards the large tree at an alarming speed. As the flame grew closer, the mice took advantage of the owl's fear and rolled their apple into a small hole they had burrowed into the tree.

" Gru-lop... gru-lop... gru-lop.. gru-lop.. gru-lop, gru-lop" The pile of leaves scattered into the air
as the large black stallion galloped across the path and soon it was quietly arriving at a small campfire inside a thick group of trees. The rider leaped off of the horse, landing with a thud followed by thunderous, metal clanking foot steps. The rider slid to a stop almost stumbling at the sight seen next. There was a shaded figure stooped over a young man as if he had just whispered something to him.

"Ah, I have been waiting for you..it took longer than I expected." A grizzly voice muffles from beneath the black cloth voile. The rider stares at the figure again, just to be sure it is Mauvais, and then draws a silver bladed sword from a large pouch on the horse. The rider raises the
sword and then with one mighty thrust breaks the light wooden shield Mauvais had quickly raised. "My master is too powerful for you, you are a fool to fight us surrender now and I might have him spare your life." The rider once again makes a mighty thrust towards Mauvais, this time breaking the small blade he was wielding. "You fool! You dare challenge my power? I will dispose of you myself!" Soon after finishing these words Mauvais raised a single hand and reached for the moon. The
creature standing before the rider was no longer completely human. It had long fur falling out from its sleeves and from under its robe. but it still had the eyes of a human.

The creature lunged towards the rider, swiping furiously and then after ripping a hole into the riders
greaves it leaped into a tree. The creature Mauvais had turned into was now whispering to a tree, then as before reached into the sky and the tree started to move. The ground felt as if there were an earthquake and when the rider looked back up, saw the tree had been brought to life
and one of its limbs were nearly in contact with the riders face. The rider quickly ducked under the limb and cut the tree at the root . It froze for a second and then collapsed, leaving a baffled creature laying on the cold dirt ground. Mauvais pulled himself to his feet and lunged at the rider, landing hit after hit until the rider was kneeling before the creature looking nearly dead. Before Mauvais could start to take a final swipe at the rider, the sword it had drawn before was risen
into the air. At first Mauvais thought that the rider was about swing at him and stumbled a few steps back but then seeing the rider staying in the position he laughed and said. "I waited this long to find you and now all you can do in your final moment is raise your sword? Pity..I hope it was worth it". Just as the final blow to the rider was about to be inflicted, the ground is in the air! A small meteor had hit directly where Mauvius was standing and sent the surrounding ground into a
frenzy.

As particles of the ground were sent off in every direction, hitting the horse, Mauvais who was still suspended in air watched as his rival escaped him after near defeat, the rider grabbed the man and dragged him off into the trees. The next morning when the towns people had awaken they heard the yell of William Rotwood. All of the villagers were shocked at what they heard William explained how his wife was missing. Some of the spectators were shocked while others seemed almost happy.
Later that day everyone had gathered in the center of the small town to discuss what had
happened earlier,this was when William made the biggest stand he ever had in his life. He stood on a crate and screamed at the top of his lungs. " I am sick of the unfair Kings that rule these lands if you my friends want a free land a land of hope and prosperity follow me!"

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Very imaginative, King - Well Done! :elephant:

That's great!! And you used my villian, hehe :D

I can't wait to read more!!!

It is really nice to see that your work is appreciated by others. :)
As for chapter 2 and 3 I might do them today not sure.