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    VFKFF Battle Revolution

    Post by awesomeMr.naruto on Sat Nov 29, 2008 1:56 am

    Battle Revolution: Chapter 1 available right now, working on the others

    Ok, before I give you the real story, here is the first glimpse, the summary!
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    [b]It was a cold night, in the year of 2010, winter had come and the Steel family had just moved to the small town of Pinedale, California, Jordan and David, Being 15 year old twins, didn't like the move whatsoever, they left so much in Carson City, but unaware, they will enter a world thrown into chaos due to the reign of The Dark Lord. During their journey, friendships shall, be made and battles fought, and will so the through it all, the undying love between two brothers.
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    Comment so i can start posting chapters a3 (P.S. red is David, blue is Jordan, purple will be there little sister tina and green is the dad. Others will be added as the story progresses.

    CHAPTER 1:
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    "Dad, please, can't we just stay in Carson, I mean we left all our friends there." "Yea Dad, come on we can't move, Carson was huge, and Pinedale well, let's say its relatively small" Both twins were staring out the window into a thick forest that surrounded the roud, they both sighed, though David, being the video game expert, decided he would spend the trip playing his DS. "Now you guys know why we moved, you kept complaining about how hot Carson was and said you wanted someplace a lot cooler." "Yea but not this, I mean you can bearly see a thing out here."Jordan kept whining for awhile, then looked back at there sister Tina, then at David. "It's going to be a long day."


    CHAPTER 2:
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    As the Steel's pulled into the motel, David asked, "Dad, a motel, please i saw a huge hotel 5 miles, we could spend the night there." "We're here because we will look for a house tomorrow, so be happy that I could even afford it" He said as he rubbed Tina's head. "But dad, even if we move here nothing will change, now that mom is gone..." Tina's voice trailed off as she was trying to hold back tears, " There, there, pumpkin as soon as we can find a new house we can start afresh." The boys were already inside settling in, they choice the bed's to the right of the room, sparing them of their crying sister. As they prepared to go to bed, Jordan sat thinking, "Something is going to happen while we are here."


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    Re: Battle Revolution

    Post by awesomeMr.naruto on Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:33 pm

    BUMP


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    Re: Battle Revolution

    Post by awesomeMr.naruto on Sat Nov 29, 2008 9:00 pm

    BUMP I'll post 5 chaptrs later today!


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    Re: Battle Revolution

    Post by ace_archer on Sat Nov 29, 2008 10:44 pm

    it looks interesting i cant wait to read it(:
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    Neat-O!
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    Re: Battle Revolution

    Post by awesomeMr.naruto on Sun Nov 30, 2008 12:38 am

    Chapter one available!


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    Re: Battle Revolution

    Post by awesomeMr.naruto on Sun Nov 30, 2008 12:46 am

    BUMPED!


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    Re: Battle Revolution

    Post by awesomeMr.naruto on Sun Nov 30, 2008 3:53 am

    Bumping, for tomorrow :)


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    Re: Battle Revolution

    Post by awesomeMr.naruto on Wed Dec 03, 2008 8:20 pm

    If no one really likes it, ill let mods close :(


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