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A little poem by little me

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VFKFF A little poem by little me

Post by rachielass1 on Thu May 15, 2008 1:29 pm




I look out,
Upon the night,
And it is there,
I see the light...

It's not moving,
It stays still,
It looks so lonely,
upon that hill...

It casts a shadow,
All around,
Such a beautiful thing,
That makes no sound...

A light in the dark,
Standing alone,
A light in the dark,
Without a home...

I look out,
Upon the night,
And it is there,
I see the light...
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Re: A little poem by little me

Post by VFKDiary on Thu May 15, 2008 1:33 pm

Very good. I see a certian someone becoming a poet when they grow up!
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Re: A little poem by little me

Post by rachielass1 on Thu May 15, 2008 1:39 pm

Me! Lawl thanks
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Re: A little poem by little me

Post by Lost_Yet_Found on Thu May 15, 2008 1:51 pm

Hmm very good, you should start working on syllables next :)
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Re: A little poem by little me

Post by rachielass1 on Thu May 15, 2008 2:45 pm

Lawl thankies
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Re: A little poem by little me

Post by vmkcosmicsilvercircle on Thu May 15, 2008 3:46 pm

omg thats so good! thumbsup way better poet than me Bowdown
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Re: A little poem by little me

Post by DLRkid on Thu May 15, 2008 3:49 pm

Very Very Good!


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Re: A little poem by little me

Post by rachielass1 on Thu May 15, 2008 4:03 pm

Aww thanks people :P
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Re: A little poem by little me

Post by VFKDiary on Thu May 15, 2008 4:05 pm

Post another poem please!

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Re: A little poem by little me

Post by Cuteekitty on Thu May 15, 2008 4:05 pm

I love your poem!!
its so pretty :)
Great Work thumbsup

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Re: A little poem by little me

Post by rachielass1 on Thu May 15, 2008 4:10 pm

Lawl thanks and i'l start work on another poem now (It won't be good)
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Re: A little poem by little me

Post by krazybird on Thu May 15, 2008 6:20 pm

Another awesome poem. Great work rachie!! thumbsup
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